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My Most Unforgettable Experience
小熊o0泰瑞0o 发表于 2006-11-17 13:08:54
这是英语A第一次的作文作业，今天刚发下来，tracy给改了好多错误。
以前从来没有哪个英语老师跟我认真讲过英语作文该怎么写，今天在课上学到了很多，毕竟很多东西太陌生了，以前只知道英语作文要分三段，现在把上课记得点东西写下来，记得不多，想起什么就写什么了：
（1）书面语中不要用简写：can't，it's等等，而用cannot ，it is
（2）不要用and but so开头，用futhermore however therefore代替
（3）that which who引导的定语从句，尽量换成短语或简单的句子，提前
（4）尽量不用there be句型
其他记不起来了，下面把作文也留下了，不是太好，但毕竟当时花了我一晚上的时间写出来的
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Last year ,I took part in the Sony Cup 2005 national undergraduate electronic design contest ,which is the most unforgettable experience in my university life ,and it is even the most unforgettable one in my life till now.
We began to prepare for the contest during that summer ,with 3 persons in each group .The students in our group came from two different majors :electronic engineering and automation .During the summer ,our teacher selected some test questions from the past exams for us to make us be more familiar with it .And we also began to program some 51 single-chip program which would be used in some modules such as keyboard program and display program .At 8 o’clock on the morning of the Septemper 7, the contest began .After comparing all the 6 questions ,we chose one about movement-controlling system which we were more familiar with .After 4 days’ hard working ,we finished it . But when we were going to Jinan to take part in the contest(we prepared the contest in Qingdao) ,we copied a wrong program .It’s a pity ,and it led to our lost .At last we only got the second prize in Shandong province .
We have learned much from this contest ,and we put what we learned from textbook into our item .This was the fist time that I took part in such a big contest .Though we lost the contest at last ,we knew that winning isn’t everything .Just as the slogan of the contest said, “Dare to create & enjoy” ,we indeed enjoyed ourselves in it.
以前从来没有哪个英语老师跟我认真讲过英语作文该怎么写，今天在课上学到了很多，毕竟很多东西太陌生了，以前只知道英语作文要分三段，现在把上课记得点东西写下来，记得不多，想起什么就写什么了：
（1）书面语中不要用简写：can't，it's等等，而用cannot ，it is
（2）不要用and but so开头，用futhermore however therefore代替
（3）that which who引导的定语从句，尽量换成短语或简单的句子，提前
（4）尽量不用there be句型
其他记不起来了，下面把作文也留下了，不是太好，但毕竟当时花了我一晚上的时间写出来的
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Last year ,I took part in the Sony Cup 2005 national undergraduate electronic design contest ,which is the most unforgettable experience in my university life ,and it is even the most unforgettable one in my life till now.
We began to prepare for the contest during that summer ,with 3 persons in each group .The students in our group came from two different majors :electronic engineering and automation .During the summer ,our teacher selected some test questions from the past exams for us to make us be more familiar with it .And we also began to program some 51 single-chip program which would be used in some modules such as keyboard program and display program .At 8 o’clock on the morning of the Septemper 7, the contest began .After comparing all the 6 questions ,we chose one about movement-controlling system which we were more familiar with .After 4 days’ hard working ,we finished it . But when we were going to Jinan to take part in the contest(we prepared the contest in Qingdao) ,we copied a wrong program .It’s a pity ,and it led to our lost .At last we only got the second prize in Shandong province .
We have learned much from this contest ,and we put what we learned from textbook into our item .This was the fist time that I took part in such a big contest .Though we lost the contest at last ,we knew that winning isn’t everything .Just as the slogan of the contest said, “Dare to create & enjoy” ,we indeed enjoyed ourselves in it.
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